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by hibaakaiko

person BlackTigerG2
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That can't be the ending, can it?!! OMG, Napa and Raditzu are going to go with that monster? And what about Gohan and Toma? It was so sad, damn Furiza! You must continue, poor Goku and Vegeta! I felt myself almost start to cry. You truly are a gifted writer, and I will be waiting for your future stories. ::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2
person Frederikke
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW FUCKING EXCITING!!! YOU ONLY HAVE ONE PROBLEM NOW...YOU HAVE TO WRITE REEEAAAALLLYYY FAST FOR I WILL GO FUCKING CRACY IF I DON'T FIND AN UPDATE ON THIS SOON....IT'S THE ONLY YAOI I READ AND YOU KEEP BOOSTING MY INTERREST!!! I LIKE THE FACT THAT FRIEZA DIDN'T DIE AND TO BE HONEST I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPEN WITH NAPPA AND RADITZ ON FRIEZA'S SHIP...AND WHAT ABOUT THEIR BABY????
person Mihoshi
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR, IT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WHY DID THEY BOTH HAVE TO DIE, WHY WHY WHY WHY *cries uncontrollably* *sniff sniff*
GOKU......VEGETA........THEIR BABY BOY *wails uncontrollably, pounding the ground*


A CURSE I PLACE APON YOUR HEAD, MAY YOU FOREVER SUFFER IN DREAMS THE WAY THEY HAVE SUFFERED!!!!!!!
AND DON'T GET ME STARTED ON WHAT'S GOING ON WITH RADITZ
HE BETTER NOT BE A TRAITOR, OR YOU ARE SOOOOOOOOO DEAD, MISTER OR MISSY OR WHAT EVER YOU ARE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
person Webtester01
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was more like the nightmare before Christmas! Quite dark!

I hope they find the daragonballs.
person Black Crystal
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you killed them *looks at hibaakaiko and weeps*
can't they just get wished back with the dragon balls?? is this the end?? whats going to happen the gohan?? oh the uncertontiy!!!
BC xx
person BlackTigerG2
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more! I LOVE it! But I hate cliffhangers, you are goin' to continue right? I can't wait until the cubs are born! And is Frieza really on Earth? Oh no! Hurry Vegeta you gotta save ur mate!! Ur awesome! ::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2
person Black Crystal
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey its me the non reviewer again just want to say that your still keeping me clueless as to what is going to happen next and i dieing and really not wanting to read at the same time - really don't want frieza to spoil the happy ness that he has created -hope you up date soon
love BC xx
person Hellagoddess
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Just read chapter 36...only 4 more to go till i'm caught up! YATTA! ^_^ V

Sorry i haven't reviewed for ages...just haven't had the time to sit and read! *pouts* Loved this chapter though...liked the dual-lemon-ness of it...something whcih i tried (and failed) to accomplish once... *sighs*

And i agree about the ice cream... *licks lips*

Oh! If you still have more chapters to go..i'm keen to beta! Email ME though! lol cause i tried to mail you (somthing like FIVE WHOLE TIMES!!LOL) and it keeps rejectin' it! *cries* Here's MY email! hellagoddess@hotmail.com

Well onto the next chapter!

Hellagoddess
person Hellagoddess
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *rolls on floor laughing* POOR Vegeta! What a shitty day! No sex and TWO pregnancies!! *shakes head and wipes tears from eyes* oh god... this should be interesting...will everyone else find out about Bulma's? Cause it seems like everyone but 'Geta knows about Goku's... (which will piss Vegeta off to no end...*sighs*...)

Great chapter yet again! *grins*

Hellagoddess
person Hellagoddess
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH NO!!! SICK GOKU!! WAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!

Bad leaf! BAD!! *slaps hand* Don't you make him die! By golly gosh i'll come over there and kick your ASS!! lol!

Awww...it was such a sweet chapter too! Everyone was all happy and everything and then...and then...*cries* Poor, poor Goku!

Great chapter though!

Hellagoddess ^_^ V

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