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by hibaakaiko

person Hellagoddess
schedule December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEE! EEEEEE! NO!! BAD FRIEZA!!! NO!!

heh...'Geta in the sex store was funny... I could so picture that... *smirks*

Another awesome chapter and I"M FINALLY CAUGHT UP! YATTA! ^_^ V

Keep up the awesome work and i'll TRY to review on time now k? Else you'll just get a big bunch like this! lol! Not that you mind i'm sure but still...

Hellagoddess

PS: Hope ya had a great xmas and got everything you wanted! I KNOW I DID! *winks and smirks* lmao!
person Black Crystal
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i'm loving the story but please update soon *puppy eyes* ps please don't kill kaka
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant view the pics!!

but i loved your update

please keep writing!!!!!!
person Camaro
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, didn\'t realize you were having trouble with a flamer. You really should have told me. Anyways, what\'s your email address now? The one on your profile isn\'t working.

Camaro
person Black Crystal
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey I know your always asking your readers to review and I must admit that I’m one of the constant readers that never reviews. I just thought that I would review for once and say that I really love your fanfiction and I check for your updates daily some times twice. I love the way that I have no real idea where your story is going, as some stories can be very predictable, keep up the suspense hope you update soon
Black Crystal
person makuba
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best stories I have read
person Tana
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww... Vegeta\'s gonna be a daddy! Horray!
person Tana
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is amazing! Definitely keep going... I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Is Furiza going to show up? I hope so- I want the bastard to die. And please don\'t kill Chichi too badly. I like her, even though she gets what she deserves in your story- she\'s a real bitch! Anyway, I love your writing style and use of flashbacks. And you made Gohan so cute, I hope he gets a little brother.
person PM
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Tons of praise to you!
person Hellagoddess
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...*speechless* I just read the last four chapters in one go...and...wow...

*has to sit back and take it all in for a while*

This story is amazing...you HAVE to keep writing it! I\'ll just die if you don\'t! Sorry i haven\'t been reviewing much...i only get the net every so often...*pouts* I love the way you portray everyone...the chacterization is fantastic and great imagry abound.

I love your lemons, they\'re so...so...touching and passionate...makes me wish i could write better! lol ^_^º

Wow who beat up Goku? I bet it was dumb Chichi...*rips frying pan from her and beats her to death* (yay!)

And stupid dumb Vegeta! Everyone KNOWS that dreams are just dreams!...i got so upset when he started getting all paranoid...OOh and when Napa got super angry at Radditzu!!! That was so sad i almost cried!! They\'re so right together and...*sniffle* it just made me all upset to see them at odds!

Ooh but i just absolutely cracked up laughing at \"Mother fucking Kami be damned, what the FUCK is that!” Vegeta exclaimed. It was totally awesome and so funny cause i can imagine him saying that...lmao

Awesome chapters and i hope to see more in the future!! Please please update... *gives inspiration with wiggly fingers* See? *wiggle wiggle*

Hellagoddess... ^_^ v

PS: I know my name for my fic sucks...can ya think of something better for me? *grin* *blinks, tilts head, swishes tail* PLEEEEEASE?

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