rate_review Reviews

i liked that chpater it was well written well. it showed a lot of vegeta\'s mental anxiet and it came out really well.

Love your story. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Love the drawing of Nappa, Radiz, and Vegeta.

that picture was awesome!!!

That pic is AWESOME! You are really very good!! great work!

Oh my goodness! Poor Vegeta..... Poor Radditzu!!!!!

awwww.... that was just so sad *tear* honestly it takes alot to move me and that was just wow. Adore your work keep it up cant wait for the next update

aww that was a such a sad chapter but please continue! i can\'t wait to see what happens! i wonder what triggered that memory. ph anyway please continue and update soon!!!

i\'ve been waiting for this update i liked this chpater goku and vegeta finally got together...physically at least, please continue and update soon!!!

in one of your chapters you seemed very upset. and you sould be, i love your writings and grammar, anyone that puts you down like that
should die. keep up the good work and don\'t keep me waiting for the next chapter! ;)

Woot! This is great! Glad you pointed out i should read it!

Please continue!!! I loved them at the fair (Vegeta\' so kawaii on rides, even when he\'s puking) and going shopping...heh heh

Napa\'s a tiny bit scary but that just because i totally can\'t see him as being even a tiny bit attractive but that\'s my personal opinion... *grin* Bald guys scare me so... *cringe* and Napa\'s pretty bald...

The Saiyago was a bit confusing as i have no printer and no scroll button but adds to the authenicity of it all... (Very sad about Ri\'ce, awww...i felt so bad)

Please update soon!!! EEEeeee!!! *squeals*

Hellagoddess