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September 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
*Kinomiya *Demolition Boys *Dickinson *Final Destination but oh well, actually I don't mind misspelled words.
What I DO mind is Kai being so damn OOC. Kai doesn't lie, not as long as I know, about place to live; he wouldn't tell ANYONE he's homeless; he wouldn't answer like THAT. He would say: "Hn." or "No." or "No, I don't" or whatever; he wouldn't lie about his house. And Kai, for all tortures of hell, wouldn't even thinking of accepting a makeover. Kai doesn't giggle. Kai doesn't cry IN DAMN PUBLIC. Kai definitely will NOT say anything in damn baby voice. Kai does NOT call Kenny Ken-Ken. Kai wouldn't hug Tyson so damn openly before he become his boyfriend. Kai doesn't curl up in bed and cry. Voltaire would NOT be that kind to Kai. KAI wouldn't be kind to Voltaire; he's much more intelligent than that (Voltaire PUT HIM IN THE DAMN ABBEY FOR FUCK'S SAKE). Kai would tolerate him at the max. He may be the uke, but it's KAI. He's NOT the typical weepy uke, damn it. Kai doesn't call Tyson's dad DAD. He'd call him Mr Kinomiya. Just like the way he call Gramps. And Kai would definitely call Voltaire by NAME or 'Grandfather' at the max. Kai won't do a lotta things you make him do in this fic.
Re-watch the damn anime. See them clearly. First, see Kai. Second, see REI (for fucks sake, he doesn't do that--a lotta things). Then Kenny (Kenny is supposed to be at least a little scared of Kai!). And of course SEE TYSON. Tyson is MUCH MORE honorable than that. Max...well. I don't really care about Hilary anyway.
But I have to say, putting Hilary like a bitch-who-is-crushing-on-Tyson is pretty good. Making Kai jealous is good, but NOT LIKE THAT DAMN IT. Making Kenny watch over Tyson is good.
But still. RE-WATCH THE DAMN ANIME. They, ESPECIALLY KAI, is waaaaaaayyyyyyyy to OOC.
-A
What I DO mind is Kai being so damn OOC. Kai doesn't lie, not as long as I know, about place to live; he wouldn't tell ANYONE he's homeless; he wouldn't answer like THAT. He would say: "Hn." or "No." or "No, I don't" or whatever; he wouldn't lie about his house. And Kai, for all tortures of hell, wouldn't even thinking of accepting a makeover. Kai doesn't giggle. Kai doesn't cry IN DAMN PUBLIC. Kai definitely will NOT say anything in damn baby voice. Kai does NOT call Kenny Ken-Ken. Kai wouldn't hug Tyson so damn openly before he become his boyfriend. Kai doesn't curl up in bed and cry. Voltaire would NOT be that kind to Kai. KAI wouldn't be kind to Voltaire; he's much more intelligent than that (Voltaire PUT HIM IN THE DAMN ABBEY FOR FUCK'S SAKE). Kai would tolerate him at the max. He may be the uke, but it's KAI. He's NOT the typical weepy uke, damn it. Kai doesn't call Tyson's dad DAD. He'd call him Mr Kinomiya. Just like the way he call Gramps. And Kai would definitely call Voltaire by NAME or 'Grandfather' at the max. Kai won't do a lotta things you make him do in this fic.
Re-watch the damn anime. See them clearly. First, see Kai. Second, see REI (for fucks sake, he doesn't do that--a lotta things). Then Kenny (Kenny is supposed to be at least a little scared of Kai!). And of course SEE TYSON. Tyson is MUCH MORE honorable than that. Max...well. I don't really care about Hilary anyway.
But I have to say, putting Hilary like a bitch-who-is-crushing-on-Tyson is pretty good. Making Kai jealous is good, but NOT LIKE THAT DAMN IT. Making Kenny watch over Tyson is good.
But still. RE-WATCH THE DAMN ANIME. They, ESPECIALLY KAI, is waaaaaaayyyyyyyy to OOC.
-A
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this i love it, this story is so great.
luv missy xxxx
luv missy xxxx
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I read this story a while ago. But now i look it up and
you didn\'t update. ::cries:: I really like it and now Im reviewing
because i wanna read more. Pwease?
you didn\'t update. ::cries:: I really like it and now Im reviewing
because i wanna read more. Pwease?
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow its really good. by the way the part when the guy was controling kai to make him dream and sleepwalk did u take that part from the movie Anastasia cuz its the same as the movie except the rape thing. Anywho the fic is really good.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That great news! Ty\'s dad adopted Kai and Kai and Ty are item now!! Wonderful!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
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April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh! Its Hilary! Run for your lives!!! Awaiting next chapter!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really getting good, I can\'t wait for more. ^^v
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter!! Please continue!!