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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeyz! This is super interesting! Can\'t wait for an update ^_^.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice im sad to see the story end.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'ve been waiting for this update! i luv this story and I like ur OC she seems tough.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the chapter its about time a adventure comes along.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luved chapter 6, it was the funniest thing when Goku came in his pants. i really enjoyed the way chapter 6 turned out because I thought the beginning was funny and it wasn\'t all out angst.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all i really like your story a lot...definitely continue, but you had one error that i see a lot in Manga/Anime fanfiction. \" Ai shiteru\" is not \'I Love You\', I Love You is actually \"Watashi/Boku Wa Anata O Aishitemasu\" in proper japanese. But other wise the rest of your translations are correct as far as i know.
Update Soon
Midnight
Update Soon
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I meant to say that your translations could be better, just stick to english
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i guess now vegeta is going to fuck goku to help him feel better.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luve , your story and your writing style...I\'m impatiently waiting for an update oh and I luv the quotes at the start of each chapter.