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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. I can\'t wait to see what happens at this dinner party. Update again soon, please.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutley love this story. Keep up the excellent work. -MaL-
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i love pan and bura togerther i think they are so cute and i can\'t wait for goten and trunks to get togerther.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but Vegeta\'s being kind of casual about the whole \"Oh, I\'m your mate now\" thing, isn\'t he?
Also, the bits of Japanese scattered throughout aren\'t doing your fic any good. They\'re distracting.
A solid fic. I\'m sure you\'re going to get better as time goes on!
Also, the bits of Japanese scattered throughout aren\'t doing your fic any good. They\'re distracting.
A solid fic. I\'m sure you\'re going to get better as time goes on!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome....... i love it , every chappie makes me excited and soooooooo want more. you are a great author and i can\'t wait to see what else you have in store.
PS.
I luv the little quote you have at the beginning of your story it makes my day to see wut it is.
Luv Ya\'ll
~Bluerossiette~
PS.
I luv the little quote you have at the beginning of your story it makes my day to see wut it is.
Luv Ya\'ll
~Bluerossiette~
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i loved the little uke goku lemon.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*scratches head* Well, If I were Bulma, and not too upset at the sayians, I would have found a way to keep them there and planted cameras with audio in their room. *GRINS*
O.o Gohan\'s not going to be happy huh? Crap to the angst that lies ahead then.
O.o Gohan\'s not going to be happy huh? Crap to the angst that lies ahead then.
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April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool fic but do you hate Buruma? The way Vegeta talks about her and to her is kinda inadequate...
Don\'t get me wrong, I LOVE Vegeta... but if my dad talked about my mom the way he talked about Buruma, I wouldn\'t like it. It sounds like he\'s trashing her. The way he should have phrased it should have rather been : \"We *no longer* have *romantic* ties to each other, and you\'ve been her friend longer, Kakarotto. It\'s better if you explain it to her yourself\"
Don\'t get me wrong, I LOVE Vegeta... but if my dad talked about my mom the way he talked about Buruma, I wouldn\'t like it. It sounds like he\'s trashing her. The way he should have phrased it should have rather been : \"We *no longer* have *romantic* ties to each other, and you\'ve been her friend longer, Kakarotto. It\'s better if you explain it to her yourself\"
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter i can\'t seem to get enough of this story.