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July 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story but when are you going to add more to it
i wont to know how scar is going to reacted when he find out that ed is
now part cat and what he going to do about it.
i wont to know how scar is going to reacted when he find out that ed is
now part cat and what he going to do about it.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What going to happen next
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon poor ed/al they can never catch a break!!
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful except the alphonse pov was in thrid person, its ok tho!!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE I BEG OF YOU! :-(
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not trying to criticise you or anything.
But POV means you\'re telling it from their perspective. And I noticed that sometimes you reverted back to second or third person.
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But I think your plot is fucking GREAT :D
But POV means you\'re telling it from their perspective. And I noticed that sometimes you reverted back to second or third person.
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But I think your plot is fucking GREAT :D
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeease keep going I want more cat-boy EdxScar pairing since I don\'t see enough of it so please keep going!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there I really enjoyed your story and I hope that you will continue with ehe next chapter. Later
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more I would love to see where this story ends up. I look forward to reading more and I love the start.
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cool idea!! write more soon!!! what are they gonna do?