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Hmm. It\'s difficult to read. Your style is choppy and shakey. It\'s a very interesting idea, but the execution needs some work.

Hmm, interesting idea. The mechanics need a lot of work however. Spelling, grammar and structure could use some spiffing up. Perhaps you\'re new to this or perhaps English isn\'t your first language but I would recommend finding a beta reader who can make sure all of your chapters are correct. The idea, however, is once again interesting and I believe it\'d be worth it to continue. Good effort and I\'d like to read more.