rate_review Reviews

yay!! you updated i really like this story and you\'re such a great writer!

*sniffles* It was too short. I liked it, but I do wish it had been a longer chapter.

yay I can\'t wait to the next chapter, i can\'t wait to see what happens......

Well, the first part of this chapter was so very random. Dare I say confusing? I hope it was meant to be so. I caught onto the important parts... I think. What is this about the girl knowing a word only Radditz used? I hope that gets explained.

Hmm, Well, I am just as glad Kakarott will be coming over later. Made me almost as happy as it made Vegeta.

wow i\'m like adddicted to your story i can\'t wait to see what happens next, i\'m trying to figure out what\'s going on. you build on the suspense and you keep unfolding the mystery slowly in a way that makes u really want to read the next chapter, i read chapters 1-10 in one sitting. i like it continue!

This is an excellent story, and for what ever reason the long time between updates, I am glad you have done so.

Keep up the good work!!!

Holy shit Celipa! I LOVE this... I remember reading the first chapter or such at the yaoi hotel but I didn\'t realize you were going to continue so quickly! I\'m in LOVE with this! It\'s so psychological and you find yourself getting as chaotically messed up as Vegeta is. It\'s like you\'ve taken us on a journey through his mind and we\'re as confused as he is sometimes, not knowing for sure what\'s there, what\'s real. The clues that tell us who isn\'t there are still subtle enough to keep us wondering, doubting our own sensibility.

It\'s AWESOME! I don\'t know who is crazier.. me or Vegeta! Or ... well, maybe you! hahaha. I adore this though.

You do seem to have your tenses going in any which direction. One minute you\'re referring to things in the past tense, like they already happened. The next your referring to events as though Vegeta is living them right then and there. It\'s a bit confusing but not TOO bad.

It\'s really like one big sad adventure and I couldn\'t help but feel sorry for Vegeta in that he dreams of Raditz and so drastically has to come back to reality once more. It\'s like wishful thinking and like a genius, you\'ve kept the past even a secret from Vegeta, keeping the story like pieces to a giant puzzle, very slowly coming together as a whole. I can\'t wait to see where you go with this. It\'s.. just WOW!

Camaro

Nice chapter, I can\'t wait to read the rest of this fic. I wonder what Kakatorro will have to tell Vegeta? I am chomping at the bit to find out!

UPDATE SOON!!!!!

Vegeta\'s Mate