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I love this story! Please continue it soon! You always seem to leave us in suspense!

AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh, the possessed maniac is in the tank room with Vegeta and killing Bulma..... AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh

Could job with Bulma\'s POV.

Personally, I think at some point I would have pissed my pants. AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

Horrifying and gruesome. : ) My Favorite kind! Go you!

Camaro

Oww... something new. I\'m not going to guess who\'s POV this is. Why? Because I\'m lame and I suck. *grins* Where\'s the next bit? Where\'s the next bit?!

Awesome! This is has definately sparked my interest! Please continue!

Whoa.. very different that what I was expecting. Don\'t get me wrong, I adore you and trust you enough not to insult your intelligence by suspecting this would be anything but ingenius but wow. The summary doesn\'t do any of this justice... only makes it seem possibly petty or cliche. Regardless, you have completely intrigued me now... I hope you\'ll let me know when you update.

Camaro

fabulous... yaoi coming up anytime soon?

Ah, from your summary, there are so many possibilities of who\'s POV this is. I am thinking it is Goku\'s because the POV said \"Children\".

Now, the best thing in this chapter is this one detail. Vegeta\'s teeth chattering. I loved that, because it tells without telling that Vegeta is going into shock. MWuahahahahahha, that is so simple yet so profound.

I do have to wonder, if my assumption is correct, who would be strong enough to do this to Vegeta then?

Excellent start, and I am glad to hear you are writing the next part already.