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Write more again soon please? Lovely story so far.

I\'m going on vacation for a few weeks, so I won\'t be able to update until then, everybody. For those who have read ch. 17, yo can pretty much guess more than likely where I\'m going with this--but hey, i need to keep things interresting, eh? Well, holla at ya\'ll when I return!

Love and Peace, (gotta love Vash,)

EM

this story is sofucking hot i need more

i love where you are going, i keep waitting in anticipation for a new chaper to be posted. please keep going..^_^.

YOU...ARE...EVIL!!!!!!!!! How could you leave off with that, they were just getting to the main event. Now you have to update soon, otherwise all your readers will die of orgasm-denial. Or at least Dou-being-fucked denial. Please write more. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The always perverted,
Nishi

This is a great story, it makes me want to keep reading more and I don\'t get bored with it. That doesn\'t happen very often. ff.net has gotten soft cause they banned nc17 type stories and last I was there they were thinking of banning yoai and yuri. THis is because minors are allowed on that site and they ignore the warnings you get when you go into those higher rated stories. then their parents find out and they sent emails to the sites and threatened lawsuits from what I heard and now the site isn\'t as good as it used to be. All because of parents that don\'t moniter what their minor children are doing on the net and then blame the owners of the site for letting them in. I haven\'t been in that site in about a year and a half but thats cause I moved back home and now use my moms comp. That site now has spyware and really screws up our comp so I can\'t go back to it till I get my own comp and put a spyware bloocker on it. But anyways glad you came here and put this story up and I\'m waiting for you to update hopefully soon.

Gah! I reeeeally like your fic, unfortunately I have only gotten to chapter five. I kind had to pull myself away, I\'d read even more but I have summer school tomorrow.D: So I hasta get muh sleepin\' in. I shall return upon the morrow to continue my enthrallment by your ficcy that is teh aweshum ^.^

OMFG..you have to write more...PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU, >>.<<....I HAVE NEVER GOTTEN THIS MUCH INTO A FIC AS I HAVE WITH THIS ONE. I love because duo is my favorite character, and i will love you for all my life until i die in a raging, car/plane accident. X3 why must you tease me by ending it like that...BUM BUM BUM...so much suspence, i MUST know what happens next. AND IF/WHEN YOU DO POST A NEW CHAPTER YOU MUST INFORM ME VIA EMAIL.....ozzyfreak04@sbcglobal.net, i swear i am over here crying because i must know what happens next....*passes out do to anxiety* ::with last breath:: please write, write like the wind........

Wow!! this is one great fic! I can\'t wait to read more!! I really want to see how they use the other toys on Duo