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*Happy sigh* There's the story I love so much. Thank you for updating! I am glad Goku has come to the realization that he can't really ever go back, unless of course he wishes to have his memory taken from him, but then, wouldn't he just repeat the same mistakes?

I am sorry and releaved he feels bad for his and Chichi's relationship. That's a terrible cross-roads to come to in any relationship.

Now I just want to know if he is going to make a decision to let her go, or is he just going to keep stringing her along, and hurting the both of them in the process.

I guess I'll wait to find out. A lot of it probably has to do with Vegeta's response. Some how, I get the feeling, Vegeta won't be happy if Goku dumps Chichi and proclaims his undieing lust for Vegeta.

Fabulous

I'M DYING HERE.

It's like excruciating pain reading this. Except it's like a GOOD KIND of pain. It's like your fic is a blender and I happily throw my brain into it. You make all the characters so... real. You take the realm of the fantastic, bring it to our doorsteps, and not only have us wholey accept it, but you do it in such a spectacular way that it enhances itself. It's like taking something grandeur, making it mundane, but that's what's so lovely about it. However, this fic is far from mundane. It's anything but. You can really see the subtle development of Goku's character. Like taking steps, or brick by brick, you have to slow down and watch or you miss how something so small became something so big. Stunning.

Ok.. I'll stop kissing up to you now. :P

Can I beg you for an early X-mas present? An update to this would be fantastic! PLEASE?!

Well as always I feel like I put the better amount of my thoughts in my IM's to you but I did just want to give you props for supplying us with SUCH AN ABSOLUTELY INGENIUS story. While you would suspect that threesomes and yaoi lemons could consume a story, sometimes the parts I find almost more sexual are the ones that appeal to our human senses, the ones that are very subtle and only detected by those who can appreciate your talent enough to look for them.

Truly, the more and more we come to know the characters (especially Goku and Chi Chi in these chapters) the more we symapthize with them and can compare them to ourselves as people. I also love that you give them such obvious flaws and yet we adore them for those as well... and I MUST MUST MUST give you well deserved props for your portrayal of the often misunderstood Chi Chi. She is very well liked in this story.. at least by me and that's rare.

Keep em' coming!

Camaro

Deviously addicting. That\'s what this fic is! I loved this chapter. Maybe I\'m a sucker for fight scenes, but, maybe it\'s because the physical violence matches the inner turmoil. It feels like it parallels their last fight with a role reversal. This time Vegeta\'s angry for their.. predicament? relationship? situation?.. while Goku, while obviously still hung up over him, seems to be more in control this time. Well played, my dear Rena. :)

You know, this chapter left me frustrated. You left us where we started. Well...except that feeling that the roles are changing...

That blush on Vegeta\'s face...and leaves...and an almost flustered Vegeta speeding home... Maybe I\'m wrong but it feels like the tables are turning.

Good fight scene. Goku couldn\'t help himself. lol

I love your writing style.

Keep it up.

Heh heh Steer. No we cant have the yaoi stop! That would make me very sad. Anyway, nice, violent chappie. Poor Goku it just brings everything up again. I await the next part. XD