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Well... that as most interesting. Hmmmm (has to ponder) So, Vegeta calls him for a \'fight\', but other than making induendo, nothing happens? Or is Vegeat just making sure Goku hasn\'t forgotten about him?

I am glad that Goku was able to resist doing anything, but I have to wonder if Vegeta is going to continue to string him along one spar at a time.

Excellent chapter! I am so happy you updated before the holiday weekend. If you cellibrate it, Happy Thanksgiving!

This is great!!!!!! I love it. I was just wondering, are you the author who wrote \'Houseguest\' A V/GK/B pairing fic. If so you are my idol. If not, you are my idol anyway. Your great and I havent read a story this good in a while.

I see Chichi as a reader too! It seems like a way that she would spend her free time, and she pushed so many books on Gohan it shows she obviously put some value in them (okay they were textbooks, but there had to be literature in there too somewhere). She was likeable in this chapt and the last, the way she seemed shy and vulnerable and softened toward Goku. But with her fanatical religious views I don\'t envision her getting as kinky as Goku would like. Their interactions in ch 10 were sweet, and it was nice to see them starting to get along-- too bad there seems to be trouble on the horizon.

Whoa. Loved it. But why I have a feeling that things are going to get messy again?

And...does Goku really feels and thinks that he finally is going to the right direction or it\'s only his...hmm...sort of a desperate try to persuade himself that everything is going to be alright? After all all that \"reunion with his wife\" happened in such a short time...
And in this case it seems that it was only Goku\'s fault that they couldn\'t communicate normaly... He makes some effort and everything just miraculously squares up, and Chichi and he seems to be like two lovebirds.

Waiting for more!

All right an update!!!! Nice to see Goku and ChiChi are finally getting along! Vegeta calls him now. Why now and what for I wonder? Hmmm I cant wait for the next chappie! XD

cliff hangers. fuckin eh. XD

YEAH! You finally updated! Its about time!! Keep writing what happens next!

*poke* Just thought I\'d put my two cents in and say I am SOOOOOO waiting for an update. I hope you have one planned for the near future.

*Smiles happily* That was soooo sweet. I really loved watching the interaction between Goku and Chichi when there wasn\'t yelling involved. It made me happy to read it. And I am glad that when Chichi did show her interest, Goku knew to take it slow. Nice, *more smiling*

But what is this? Vegeta is signalling Goku? Hmmm... *narrows eyes* What\'s going to happen?

Yesh, it was a very evil cliff hanger to a rather sweet chapter.

Thank you for updating!

I know I told you quite a few things that I liked on AIM but I did want to come over and leave a review since it\'s only a common courtesy that too many thankless pieces of shit on this website overlook. I find you\'ve created such an erotic world here that it\'s hard to get back into reality and accept the fact that sex is still such a taboo in our world.

Everything, every sentence, every word is sexual in this story yet transforms into so much emotion and meaning that it\'s often overwhelming. I find that while Chi chi is \"hateable\" in every since of the word, in this story, you also make her somewhat pitiable. In that, I feel the age old inclination to view Goku as sexually frustrated and selfish male. Every feeling (as I said earlier) generated by this story is either hot or ice cold.. there is no luke warm.

Vegeta can be viewed as an overprotective male, yet also, a sexual predator in so many instances. Bulma, while possibly the most human of them all, is hard to grasp at times which makes her all that much more intriguing. Yeah, I think that\'s the best word. You\'ve created these characters to be so intriguing that while the storyline is on its own addictive, the people you create are the drug itself.

Please continue writing!

Camaro