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you tease us so why why ...and i love the story too =^6_6^= meow

Oh, Rena. I promised to review, and I always put it off, and I almost ran off to bed again without leaving one behind. Wow. What can I say? It\'s such a dynamic story in many different ways. Then again, you have the lovely, diverse perspectives of all the characters meshed together in this superb drama that just exudes.. something. Something thrilling, something bitter-sweet, something that makes you crave more of it. If your fics were a drug, I\'d be an addict, that\'s for certain. It\'s torturous - too - containing a mix of heavy eroticism and angst. \'Never quite sure the direction in which everything will take, but that\'s part of the joy of reading this story. I really tried to give you a better review than I have. If it wasn\'t sufficient I guess I\'ll have to try harder next time, haha. Keep up the most excellent work.

K has some real issues!!! How frustrating for him!!! To want and not know what he wants ...and yet...want again!!!

He\'s never had a blow job and now his so called wife wants him to wait?! I bet the \'itch is sleeping around!!!

How sad for him...his mind is creating fantasy...a \'phantom couple\' for him to play with...

Wet dreams is all he has... ....and as the song goes.....

\"Just my imagination...once again...running away with me....it was just my imgi-na-ation runnin\' away with me\"

Oh My.... Well, I am certainly interested in seeing if Chichi comes through with her promise. She seemed a little shy or reticent about it.

Now why can\'t I have dreams like that? Of course, I\'d probably be in the same situation as Goku... nice dream... to bad it didn\'t go any where.

I am so happy you updated, and I hope you won\'t take as long inbetween updates. This is an excellent story!!!

Wow. Intense. Goku\'s frustrations and convictions warring with one another.

And Chichi finally relents! Things between them can only get better from here on out....or do they? ;-)

I look forward to your next update.

Like moths to a flame...moths to a flame... The question is: who is the moth? and who is the flame?

The stakes, now, are higher... who succombs first? Vegeta definitely knows how to fuel the fire...and stoke the flames.... Need. Want. Desire. It now haunts his dreams.

The observer now becomes the observed.... stoke the flames..... Desire.... want.... need.....
putting out fire....with... g a s o l i n e!!!

Interessing...

I wonder what Bulma will think when she finds out.

Fantastic chapter (ch 8)! I really have to wonder how much more Goku can take without losing his mind. I keep expecting him to have a total mental breakdown any second now– though he’s already sort of begun that, hasn’t he, by half-losing awareness in their bedroom and disobeying Vegeta in the first place. The fight in the last chapter was certainly unexpected (though not really, when you think about it). Vegeta has got to be the masochist of all masochists, if he enjoys even getting his bones broken by Goku in a fight. Well, with Saiyans everything is more extreme, I guess! Also it seemed a sudden and refreshing change for B and V to be looking at Goku in a new way, as if the light had been turned on the moment he took the risk of “tasting,” and now they are forced to see him as a sexual person. Previously in the bedroom, when he was only watching, they (well, moreso with Bulma) seemed to only consider him like another accessory to their kink– the voyeur element. That was a gorgeous lemon at the end, btw. I am as far from being a BV fan as you can get, but for some reason that particular lemon just really appealed to me. Wonderful sensory descriptions.^^

Ah…just pure skill. I almost was begging Vegeta to allow Goku to participate in their fun.

Goku is obsessed with them. Though, I still wonder if he has preferences.

Actually I feel sorry for Goku. He has no control over his life right now – all he can hope is that Vegeta will overcome his possessive borders and will let him in.

Wonderful chapter as usual!

O.o Intense...I like it! More soon, please!