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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gorgeous, tense, and erotic as hell.
As usual!
I keep waiting for one of them to break. Okay, eagerly anticipating it might be a better description. So hot, and yet the guys haven\'t really touched each other much yet. *sighs*
As usual!
I keep waiting for one of them to break. Okay, eagerly anticipating it might be a better description. So hot, and yet the guys haven\'t really touched each other much yet. *sighs*
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August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, you updated. :)
Ah, I sort of wish Goku could find continued satisfaction in his boring life. Of course, then there wouldn\'t be many lemons or possibly even a reason to continue this story, ne? I get the feeling this isn\'t finished between Vegeta and Goku, even if it is just Goku unable to restrain himself. I guess the whole \'plot\' depends on where he decides to go with his future.
Excellent lemons, limes and foreplay, as usual.
Ah, I sort of wish Goku could find continued satisfaction in his boring life. Of course, then there wouldn\'t be many lemons or possibly even a reason to continue this story, ne? I get the feeling this isn\'t finished between Vegeta and Goku, even if it is just Goku unable to restrain himself. I guess the whole \'plot\' depends on where he decides to go with his future.
Excellent lemons, limes and foreplay, as usual.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I love it. This isn\'t the end, right? Another question . . . when does the yaoi come in? Update soon!
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I need a cigerette. Or ten. Jaysus.
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...i knew it would have to come to a head sooner or later...Nice touching moment there at the end lol...I can see how goku would get all angry (i would!)
Really like this fiction...so much that i\'ve added it to my Reccomended reading, along with Bejiita Unattached
You\'re such an awesome writer and i love ALL your stuff! Keep updating! I\'d even pay you if i had the money to spare! lmao!
Really like this fiction...so much that i\'ve added it to my Reccomended reading, along with Bejiita Unattached
You\'re such an awesome writer and i love ALL your stuff! Keep updating! I\'d even pay you if i had the money to spare! lmao!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God!!! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!! Really I can\'t! I\'m dieing here!!! please I want the lemon and I want it now!!! who\'s gonna be uke? I prefer Vegeta! That is, if there is going to be a lemon. I really hope so, anyways, I already had a bottle of wine and it\'s waaaaaaay across my bedtime... so don\'t mind my weird review....
Just update really, REALLY fast! I\'m dieing here!!!!!! Whatever, I really love your story so far!!!! keep it up!
Love SammO
Just update really, REALLY fast! I\'m dieing here!!!!!! Whatever, I really love your story so far!!!! keep it up!
Love SammO
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I believe I didn\'t spell dieing right....
well I\'m from holland, and remember the botlle of wine and the time, okay??
theeheeee, I\'m annoying myself!!!:D
well I\'m from holland, and remember the botlle of wine and the time, okay??
theeheeee, I\'m annoying myself!!!:D
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Two idiots. Like always – first fight then think *shaker her head*
So…it’s really funny. Both bloody, both sweaty and both aroused. Is going to be a lemon in the next chapter or Vegeta is going to be a stubborn asshole again?
The chapters was angsty and horny - my favorite combination. Loved it!
So…it’s really funny. Both bloody, both sweaty and both aroused. Is going to be a lemon in the next chapter or Vegeta is going to be a stubborn asshole again?
The chapters was angsty and horny - my favorite combination. Loved it!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While I am sad that the story had to go so far between Bulma and Vegeta for the truth to finally come out, I am so fucking relieved that those two have finally figured out what\'s on eachother\'s minds. *Happy sigh*
Excellent chapter. Good indepth thought processes.
Update soon please!!!
Excellent chapter. Good indepth thought processes.
Update soon please!!!
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July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
What a paradox!!!!
WOW!