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Thanks for your email, Rena! I think I see the fic a lot more clearly now.^^

The ultra-conservative Christian churchgoing seems very AU for the DBZ universe, but I suppose it could happen. The story is well-written (proper spelling, yes!), your erotic scenes are top-notch as usual, and the angsty psychological insights and growth from Goku are well-done and captivating. But... I\'m sorry, but I just cannot help thinking that Bulma and Vegeta are *total assholes* in this fic. They let Goku stay there all that time, basically flaunting their mad sex life to him when they know how Chichi is and they have to see how deprived and horny and desperate he is, and then they expect him to just sit there with his hands to himself and never want to join in. It seems extremely cruel, or else extremely thick-headed on their parts. But maybe it\'s all part of a master plan to bring him to them... or something? o.O Also, as a Goku fan, the entire \"Vegeta is the ultimate sex god meant to be worshipped and envied and Goku is a pathetic ignorant dope who grovels in his inferiority\" theme that has been done so much by Vegeta fans is extremely tiresome. Please don\'t think I\'m trying to flame or to be a bitch here-- I love your fiction work, your doujin work, and your other art work-- it\'s just that this particular fic kind of sticks in my craw. Maybe I\'m being too judgmental too early (I tend to do that sometimes *sweatdrops*). I look forward to seeing how you will continue this fic. From Bulma\'s comment \"I love being the only one who can make him look that way,\" I get the feeling that she doesn\'t plan on sharing.^^

Im dying. Youre killing me here! GAH poor Goku!!! Someone PLEASE give the man the relief he so rightly deserves!! Heehehe loved the scene where he licked Bulmas fingers clean. I wait for the next chappie. XD

Pleeeeeaaaaassseee! Write more!

Talk about `dejavu! Goku felt exactly as I did while attending church....psalm singing, tambourine whackers...to quote juge roy bean: \'there\'s nothing worse than reformed whores!\'

So becoming a mikquetoast is Goku\'s way of doing pennance!? [What skeletons are in YOUR closet, ChiChi?]

He is not going to Vegeta on his own....his fall from grace...his loss of innocence...he\'s being pushed--from behind!!

Wifey\'s not takin\' care of business...[hey ChiChi, tcsddeo!?]

What price ignorance...*ahem*...innocence

He has finally crossed the line...flaunting the fact by hanging around ...

anytime now he will be a willing participant....

....GERONIMO!!!....

*gasp* Is Goku kissing Bulma?? Ohhh...he might get a blowjob... O.O *doesn\'t really expect it* Such a good chapter! ^_^

Good job! That was hot! Let Goku join in with Bulma and Vegeta soon. That would be soooooo hot!!!

Okay, If I were in Goku\'s postion, I\'d have already gone insane by now. I know exactly what he meant when he thought it was a blessing and a curse. I think I\'d be sliding down the curse side of the hill at the moment.

OH, still so hot! *grins*

Soo...is Vegeta jealous about Bulma or he\'s a bit afraid and uneasy about those \'strange\' affection signs that Goku is showing towards his ass and sperm? I wonder, I wonder... But having in mind how Vegeta loves that vibrator, he shouldn\'t be...hmm...reserved toward his Kakarott. They all could make such a nice bundle.

I just love how Goku is being pulled deeper and deeper.

A wonderful chapter!

Ah, another amazing work. It\'s interesting, smart and sharp. The place where Goku tells Bulma after oral sex that it\'s not polite talking with one\'s mouth full is brilliant. And the place where Goku says where has he learned reading from...ingenious.
Goku\'s mind and cravings developement, his planning, putting so much thoughts and effort to plan his show sheddule...aww...fun to read.
Sure Goku would like sex and food idea.
And Nimbus. Poor Goku, because of his obsession, he lost his pet.

Soo...Goku tries to sate his thirst for Vegeta using Chichi. And at the same time feels proud that he learned something from watching Vegeta and Bulma. whoa, Goku.

Eagerly waiting for more!