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Awwww...poor Gokuu...I mean...it\'s bad enough he isn\'t gettin any..but he feels so bad about it... *hugs him*

I loved Bejiita\'s reaction to him eating the banana though! ;)

More soon, please ^^

While not the usual frantic lemon pace of the rest of this story, I still loved this chapter. Thank you for sharing a different sort of view of these... two. I had to get adjusted to it just like Goku did. :D

Update soon please!!!!!

I can only think of one other story I have done this to....


When you gonna update??? huh, Huh, HUH????

O.O Wow! I love this! The sex is so hot! *leers* I also love the way you\'ve portrayed the characters. I kinda felt bad for him when he tried to put what he\'d \'learned\' into practice though *snickers* poor guy! Keep up the great work!
JJ

When will you come out with another chapter? Will Goku ever get to participate? Will he ever get a blowjob?

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Please! This is an EVIL cliffhanger!!!

Sorry, this is going to be a short review.

Poor Goku having to go to church with Chichi...... sooooo boring.

*drools* What exactly are Bulma and Vegeta up to having Goku over so often? I think we\'d all like to know. *grins*

HOT HOT HOT...... I LOVE this story. *drools* I know I should be thinking about Goku\'s reactions and Vegeta\'s \'control\'.... but I can\'t think about anything but the lemons and limes (and now cherries... hehe) Ah... so good. *purrs*

I certainly hope this continues. MWuahahahahahhaha... Steamy.

Now this is the proper sort of evil story. *grins* So kinky. Now, if you want to know the difference between kinky and perverted, I guess you\'ll just have to email me.

I read this from the link you left at dA *drools more* Hope there\'s G/V or V/G action soon! :D

As sexy as this is, it\'s also hilariously funny and personal. I love it so far. I almost cried laughing when Goku says \"chi chi always says it\'s not polite to talk with your mouth full\" and when he comments on how it\'s probably the wittiest thing he\'s ever said. It\'s just awesome. I also like how empowered you made Bulma, not just the tiny, innocent little girl that naughty Vegeta corrupts with his demeaning sexual positions but an actual STRONG sexual person who does what she wants and goes for what she needs. That is SOO COOL!

I\'m usually not into the whole pwp.. but this isn\'t exactly one of those anyways. It\'s very sexy yet interesting to me. And the sex is of course very creative, almost to the point of an artform.

In fact, you\'ve written this SO well and SO personal, it\'s like we\'re feeling what Goku feels. Turned on of course! haahha but also EMBARRASSED, ashamed! It\'s great so far. Good job! Really gets a reaction out of me.

Camaro