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by RealRoyMustang

person My17thRedEyE
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet going. This actually has a plot! I am HORRIBLE with plots... which is why I can only write drabbles and one-shots... *sigh* lol but anyway, great writing, and the fighting seemed real. Also great work on including Al as an involved character... I\'ve read far too many fics which were unappreciative (spelling?! O.o) of Al. *hugs*

yay!

--My17th
person Tejinashinsenofelvenfire
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... Cute... I can\'t wait to see more of this.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great idea -- I absolutely loved it!!! ^___^ Keep up the good work!!!
person Ri
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! You must update! I want to know what will happen next! Please update soon! ^^
person Ashley
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! This is neat so far. Can\'t wait for yaoi scenes.
person Fire_an_ice
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this but i hope this doesn\'t mean you won\'t up date your other fics any more don\'t that I\'ll cry anyway it was good so update this and your others^_-

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