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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was just sooooo good! ^^ Great work on that piece! Loved it!
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Freakin', awesome story. One of those very few very well written sex stories. You need to figure out a way to make money off of stories this good (can't this one for obvious reasons). I give it a well desevered 5... out of 5.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!!!!! I have NEVER read anything like that! Well yes I\'ve read a lot lemon and such, but that was something... somehow it was different. Both Kai and Tyson were normal, just themselves. The story had all emotions in it, and... I just can\'t say it by words, it was so beautiful. I was completely hypnotized by it and just wanted to read more and more and more of it... I was disappointed and surprised when it ended - I didn\'t notice how it came to it\'s end, I just wanted to read more. I really want to read more like that.
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooo! *grabs her fan and fans herself silly* Über hotness! Super fantastic fic, Maccadole! Keep on writing excellent stuff like this and my muses will have to break out the ressurrection kit for me again! @_____@
Kali
Kali
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey great fic lol, very good lemon tee hee! i never knew kai could be so flirty! lol... i hope you do more like this or maybe a sequel for htis? i duno if thatd work tho... but anyway i really liked this!
Liah xx
Liah xx
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!! Excellent job!!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O WOW................. OMG THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!! u gotta make another one!!! please??? iwanna read anoter one jsut lik it!!! well, i gtg, later!!!!111
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Mac-chan that was so incredibly HOT!!!!!!!!!! Wow this is soo good for ya firts *drools* you really should write more stories you are doing a great job!!!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoaaa! That was really... smexy. XD Such cuteness!
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April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great very great please write more and update soon okay