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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well I must say I found it rather amusing and quite good. But forgive me if I offend you, but I think you should divide the story into a few paragraphs to make it look neater and easier for users to read. Other than that, all I can say is, that I enjoyed it :). Good job.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was positively the worst thing I\'ve tried to read recently. How old are you, 10? Grow up a bit and experience sex first before you try to write about it.
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crappiest story ever. I\'m sorry, but its true. You need ALOT of work, heh.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you suck that was the worst lemon ever i bet you have never even had sex.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey this is the auther i hope u liked my story please tell me how i did its my frist one thanx :P