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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. your story-telling ability is supurb and your grammar and all are great and it makes reading your work supremely enjoyable. i could never put this story down, but i have class in five hours and i haven't slept yet... Anyway, back to the point. I love slave fics, and am glad that i have finally found what seems like a fantastic one for FMA now! The length of your chapters is fun and really goave me the change to get swept up in what was happening, and i sincerely look forward the the next chapter! :)
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Still love! Read this throug like billion times and love it still! Update so I can\'t learn the chapter by memory and stop reading :D
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...and this, too, is strangely compelling. Will there ever be more of it? *hopeful*
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gotta please update ASAP! I just can\'t wait to find out what happens next!
It\'s honestly one of the best stories I\'ve ever read! ^_^
Also, please continue on writing The Stepping Stone...curiosity will kill this reader of yours if you don\'t! >__<
It\'s honestly one of the best stories I\'ve ever read! ^_^
Also, please continue on writing The Stepping Stone...curiosity will kill this reader of yours if you don\'t! >__<
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhangers are evil...but I\'m loving this story. ^_^
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome, that was awesome!!!! i love it
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow...this was a great story. I wish there were more of it tho :(
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is shaping up to be a wonderful story, I\'m really impressed & interested to see where the roy/ed bit will go-- Please keep going with it :)
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.........WHAT HAPPENS!!!!????? OMG!!! That was so good....please write more....SOOON!!!! PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASE!!!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing!! This story was very well written and you can tell you put a lot of thought into it. I truly appreciate how you were able to keep the characters in character even though you put them through a different reality.
I have one comment about Ed, I was surprised you never mention the fact that he doesn\'t like to be called short yet.
Other than that, great story and please keep writing!! :)
I have one comment about Ed, I was surprised you never mention the fact that he doesn\'t like to be called short yet.
Other than that, great story and please keep writing!! :)