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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well written and very interesting.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, you just ought to continue! ^_^x Ed is so cute, and wonderfully in character, under the given circumstances.
Roy in the other hand would, imho, be a bit mor sure of himself. Sure he never had a slave, but he\'s still himself, and I think it\'s part of him that he usually doesn\'t show any weakness. I liked how he kissed Ed though! ^^x
About the lines at the beginning of chapter 7:
I think Henry Wadsworth Longfellow\'s name wasn\'t spelled correctly, and the title is \"The Witnesses\" (plural) as far as I know. ^^;; Never mind, guess I\'m half teacher or so. XD
neway, I love your story and can\'t wait to read on!
~Horizont
Roy in the other hand would, imho, be a bit mor sure of himself. Sure he never had a slave, but he\'s still himself, and I think it\'s part of him that he usually doesn\'t show any weakness. I liked how he kissed Ed though! ^^x
About the lines at the beginning of chapter 7:
I think Henry Wadsworth Longfellow\'s name wasn\'t spelled correctly, and the title is \"The Witnesses\" (plural) as far as I know. ^^;; Never mind, guess I\'m half teacher or so. XD
neway, I love your story and can\'t wait to read on!
~Horizont
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good pacing and characterization, even content. Very humanistic approach. I think you\'re one of the few people here who think deeply about what they write.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there. I really liked your story and I\'am looking forword to your next chapters. Jane
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool AU story. Curious to see what happens and what the Sins have in mind for Edo...!