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your story was great until it became a happy school fic
the chapters where duo and solo are litle are the best
but wen duo started to sing that rasmes song(good song) the chapters where going from bad to worse and where did quatre come from and the others?
and ho is c-man?
anyway your first chapters were great i loved them and are in my top 10 of ad fanfiction net i just hope your chapters wil be like that again and that duo/solos brother returns he was a cool good/bad guy

Ohhhh, next chapie!!! And sooooo soon!!! I love ya!!
Poor Solo... Meeting Quin again and being used by said "brother"... I wonder if Quin will ever be good again... Hope that DUo could kick his butt for all the wrong the bastard has done... But why does Quin wear a braid? He still in love with Duo??
I really hope that you could update sooner, I really want to find out what happens next.
Huggles

YES YES YES YES YES!!! A NEW CHAPIE!!!! THANK YOU!!! Hope the next chapter would be posted soon too. Still.... so lil'... no, actually, no Duo at all in this one made me very lonely..... More Duo in next chapter puleeeeezu!! I really miss the shorty! And I hope that there would be some interaction between Quin and Duo next time too... not to mention the 1x2 one as well. ^o^
Hope to read more soon,
Huggles,
Anya

Gee, for goodness sake, please post a new chapter already!! I'm very tired of waiting, really. You keep 'revising' previous chapters, though they hardly needed any of it. The story is really great, and it really is a bad thing not posting more of it. (All my reviews for these chapters are at MM.org)
Hope you post the continuation soon.
Hugs,
Anya

I love this story! I love it so much! I just thought I should tell you that. before I say my two cents about what's going on.
Heero mistaking Duo for a girl to get Relena off his back... classic. Wonderful! I'm really liking how well you're bringing all the characters together. I thinking your doing a wonderful job of keeping the characters true to their personalities but still using your own plot and effects on the characters, which effects how they all act. It's wonderful! Hope to see more soon! I want to find out how the room situations are going to work out... HAHA! Can't wait! ^,^

uuuuuu, poor Quin..... But is he going to take an unwilling Duo again?? If so, you're evil!!!
Still I'm glad that other pilots will appear soon. I really was wondering which would be the eventual pairing.
Good luck & please update soon,
Hugs

Did I tell you that I'm in love with you???? Maybe I did....
I LOVE YOUR STORY - I just read at mediaminer that it was your first attempt to write fics, MAN, what it would be like if you continue!!!! Your style is very captivating and the plot!!!!!!!!!! very thrilling and just simply brilliant.
Still, just one suggestion - Rasmus is good, but I think HIM's "Vampire Heart" or "Killing Loneliness" would suit Duo more - though this is just an opinion.
Hope you'd write another chapter soon.
Hugs

I love it more and more!!!! Very interesting!!! Still, are they gonna be adults any time soon???

And I crav to find out what\'s next!!!
Hi!! Just wanted to say - really great and interesting story!!! Hope Duo would remain the main character till the end and that Quin would reappear again (don\'t blame me - I like the bastard)
Have a nice day & lotsa chocolates!!

I\'m surprised that this fic doesn\'t have more reviews - it\'s coming along nicely and really has potential. The backstory was interesting, although I do admit that the POV switch and the flow were a bit hard to follow at times, but despite that it was well done. Your character development was wonderful, and I look forward to see what happens next. I hope you intend to follow up with Solo as much as Duo, for you\'ve created great characters for both of them. Keep up with this one - I look forward to reading more.

~Su