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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:O good. please continue. make chaps even longer.
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September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now lets get Goku inthis and make it a threesome. heh it's up to you
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow cool, very hot chapter, update soon.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wait i just thought of something wouldnt goten be a grown man at this point in time . oh well update
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YOU ACTUALLY UPDATED THIS FIC!! im shocked, shocked i tell you this thing is so old. well update soon Peace out
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Where should I start? This first caught my eye because of the pairing. I'm not a big ChiChi fan, but this just...wow. Puts her in an incredibly different light.
You write stream-of-conscious which is an extremely hard style to master, and I commend you for it.
This is absolutely beautiful, and it will be going on my favorites. Please, don't abandon this fiction. It's just amazing.
You write stream-of-conscious which is an extremely hard style to master, and I commend you for it.
This is absolutely beautiful, and it will be going on my favorites. Please, don't abandon this fiction. It's just amazing.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gahh, you write such hot, HARD lemons-- they're awesome! Good to see you're back and posting again. I like the little details in this one: Chichi calling him oujisama and Vegeta calling her by name (seems they're forming a deeper attachment), and especially the little hiccup of Chichi's. Yeah, it used to be that I couldn't stand Chichi either, but she's grown on me as well. Go figure. Bring on the next chappie! I'm dying to see Goku's reaction! I have to see if he'll beat Vegeta to a pulp or join them, or maybe some combination of both. X)
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummmm well that was hot..i need more!!! Great job,
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG
I have to agree that was brutal. My kind of sex :)
it's about time you started to write again,but the wait was worth it. Update soon ok!!!!! needs more. ys and i can't wait for goku to come back after that ;P
I have to agree that was brutal. My kind of sex :)
it's about time you started to write again,but the wait was worth it. Update soon ok!!!!! needs more. ys and i can't wait for goku to come back after that ;P
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is...HOT, WILD, AND PASSIONATE! Holy hell! That was great! Loved it...must make you write more!
LOVE and OH, HELLS YEAHS!
V.M.
LOVE and OH, HELLS YEAHS!
V.M.