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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a rather brutal lemon. I really don't think Chichi had any idea was she was in for. *gulps*
I am very interested to see what happens when Goku enters the mix.
There was only one thing I didn't care for in this chapter. It went from past tense to present tense. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but it threw me off.
Looking forward to your next update!
I am very interested to see what happens when Goku enters the mix.
There was only one thing I didn't care for in this chapter. It went from past tense to present tense. I don't know if you did this on purpose or not, but it threw me off.
Looking forward to your next update!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::pokes head out from under \"The Beast Inside\"::
Well, how did I miss this one??
This is awesome and *odd*, but it works. Kakarot returning could make things \"interesting\". *If* he\'s upset, I know he and Vegeta will work out their anger/possessiveness through battle (even if Kakarot returns Vegeta\'s lust he could still be upset about Vegeta shagging ChiChi), but how will he react towards ChiChi? Will he be mad at her? Disappointed? Hurt? Excited?
Well, how did I miss this one??
This is awesome and *odd*, but it works. Kakarot returning could make things \"interesting\". *If* he\'s upset, I know he and Vegeta will work out their anger/possessiveness through battle (even if Kakarot returns Vegeta\'s lust he could still be upset about Vegeta shagging ChiChi), but how will he react towards ChiChi? Will he be mad at her? Disappointed? Hurt? Excited?
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a fic before that was only Vegeta/ChiChi, but if all of them were as good as yours, then I most definetly would. I\'ve always thought that Vegeta and ChiChi could make it work. I want to read more. I can\'t wait to find out what else happens. You are doing a very nice job on this fic so far. I love the need between the two of them. Keep up the good work.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah. Um.... *scratches the back of her head* Are you gunna continue this? I hope so! #^^#
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is good, I was wondering ifthere would be another Vegeta/Chi chi lemon, so when are you goingto make this on a lemon? hehe^_^
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
muh ha ha let the games begin continue
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written. I really like the disjointed chain of thought style. There were a couple of spots where it was confusing as to who the speaker was in the third chapter but it still wasn\'t overly bothersome. Good job. Looking forward to more. -El-
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This better end in someones death.
Or a triangle.
Either way, Id be happy.
Or a triangle.
Either way, Id be happy.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*FAINTS* I WANT MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! please....^^