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person Super Saiyan 4 Chi Chi
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Super Saiyan 4 Goku better show up! *grumbles*
person Macha
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, No, I had no idea it was going to be dinner before the entree. Made me chuckle. I liked it. *smirks* I am just surprised there wasn\'t more slurping of the noodles going on. hehe

Good chapter, I still like the choppy way it\'s written. Straight and too the point. *nods*
person Lizzy
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking awsome. Best alt. pairing ever. I was getting so sick of the constant Goku/Veg and Veg/Bulma - pairings, I was ready for something new. And BOOM! here you are, writing very aggressivly, just the way I love it.
So don\'t you dare stop. Please continue!
Liz~
person Lizzy
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still good :D
Hm dunno about Goku tho, lol, I like the character... cept he treats his wife like crap. Which makes me hate him to an extent.
Hope you got something good planed.
I\'ll be reading!
person Maria
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Kids always messing up a god thing. I can\'t wait for the next chapter..so hurry up(JK) NOT.....
person Macha
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I guess lunatic was the correct word. HORNY beyond belief is more like it.. for both Vegeta and Chichi.

*shakes head* Was that Goku calling Vegeta\'s name when he was half way back to capsule corp? I found it interesting the Prince would concider having them both... tastey.

Yes, the story is choppy and confusing, but I do like the style. Makes it very fast paced.

person Vegeta\'s Mate
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luffly! X3 I think that has to be one of the hotest almost lemons I\'ve ever read. ^.^ Please continue, I rreally like this fic!
person Macha
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so I can\'t figure out which one of them is the bigger lunatic at the moment.

Chichi for still going through her robot actions, still talking at times as though Goku is still there. Is she in some sort of mental crisis that hasn\'t played all the way out to a break down yet?

Or Vegeta, for stalking the harpy. Really, that\'s what he is doing, stalking her. He seems to get his wires crossed about hating female persons (aka Bulma) and wanting to have sex with them (now Chichi). It really makes me curious as to how that happens. What goes on in a person\'s (or in this case, sayian\'s) psychie to make that acceptable.

person maria
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW you can see them almost go at it. I\'ve always felt that she needed to get F*cked more often, but Goku wasn\'t there for her. I like this story and the fact that you made it a chichi and vegeta makes it even better. please update soon...i want to read a good lemon..hot and steamy...
person super saiyan4 chi chi
schedule April 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...I\'d rather this not be a Chi Chi and Vegeta fic....but I\'ll read it all because you mentioned SS4 Goku :P also it\'d be cool if you made him bust in the room and beat Vegeta for being on his woman lol, please put some more SS4 Goku in it :)

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