rate_review Reviews

O.O; HOLY SHIT! Wait....I guess it makes sence. Vegeta picked Bulma for her looks and for her mouth...ChiChi has one of those attributes so I can see the attraction. Good job, just need to use some: I\'s, he\'s she\'s, hers, his\' and other things like that. Seems like you were rushing the words a bit just to get the damn thing out. ^.^ still good though. Update Soon!

I definitely like this style--- especially the quick bits of memories explaining things -- short and unemotional even though they still haunt... also, vegeta\'s small observations with sight and smell --- great stuff!