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by Bulma

person Liz
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sob* too soon to end, I love cc/veg action, i wish more people would write something with those two.
Oh well.. it was awsome while it lasted. Thanks for writing :)
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And it does. I am content.
person maccam
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m going to miss this story. I would love to have read that they had a child got married. I loved this story, anything that has to do with these two are my fav. thanks for writing it. can\'t wait to read more of your great writing *HUGS*
person Macha
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, this is a much better ending than what chapter 2 would have been. I am very happy you wrote more chapters to this story.

Yeah, I can certainly see how Vegeta would have taken offense to the gift basket. I am glad Goku was able to make Vegeta see in a different light.

I hope to read more stories from you soon!!!
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhm. Nice.
person Macha
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright? You have to ask? That was awesome!!! You did an excellent job with the lemon. There were no ackward moments that you didn\'t mean to write (i.e. Vegeta giving Chichi oral sex)

Excellent job my dear. Keep up the good work, and although I truely do enjoy lemons, don\'t forget plot with this baby. I think it has more potential than a drawn out PWP.
person maccam
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*JOYS* well be dreaming of my Prince tonigth.. that was AWESOME VM *HUGS* girl you can write your little heart out. that was great....Please update soon......*FANS* self ^_^
person Liz
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe, awsome :D woot woot CC/Veg lemon - For the Win!
person Macha
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I liked what you had written, but now I have to think of you as EVIL. You did that on purpose!!!! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh. Udate soon you evil person.

What will Vegeta think when he finds out Chichi wasn\'t thinking about Goku while moaning in her sleep? :) Mwuahahahah, I want to know!
person maccam
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYEYSYEYS.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now if they could only try it together just to see if they fit for each other...oh i can\'t wait now to read whats next ^_^

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