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by Bulma

person Liz
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haha, \"Banshee, we need to talk.\" hilarious. loved that line, had to clamp down on my lips not to laugh out loud, and waking up my husband.
Anyway. Please continue, CC/Veg action ahead? I can smell it :)
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The set up for that was great. I like the idea of the Banshee and the Vegetable. I certainly like where you seem to be going with this.
person Liz
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whaaa? what did you do with Veg/Chi\'s lemon moment? I WANT IT! :/ *sobs*
person maccam
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok i like the revision but i do want a LEMON with chichi and vegeta PLEASE. I felt there was nothing wrong with the other way. so i guess will see...I love this story..
person Macha
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*pulls at hair* That\'s just crazy and sad. Don\'t get me wrong, I loved the chapter, but.... @.@ AAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhh. I am glad that they all switched spouses, now I want to know if this is finally the way it was meant to be.

I hope you have plans on ellaborating on this story. I can see a lot of experimenting going on here: Depth of emotions being only one.

I would really enjoy another chapter. In other words, Update! I\'d like to know how exactly Bulma plans on making this up to Vegeta and Chichi, and if Vegeta and Chichi see a need for anything to be made up to them.
person maccam
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhh i can\'t wait to read more of this great story. i\'m sooo excited and your doing a great job with them both. please pleaase continue this ...
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not only is this still awesome awesome stuff, you emailed me to let me know. I feel touched.


Very good POV stuff. Still as good as the previous two.
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also note, I liked the previous two chapters, but they were unresolved. If this was the end, I could live with that.
person Liz
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, please do continue. :)
person Danielle
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! :) Very different, I couldn\'t picture V/CC, but I can for sure see G/B. Good work and keep those plot bunnies happy!!!! More, more, more......

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