rate_review Reviews

Damn it!!!! Why does this have to be a PWP? There are so many angles and emotions that aren\'t going to get explored in just two chapters. AAAAAarrrrrrrrrrg!

Um.... Very well written. Yes, jumping the gun, but if it is only suppose to be a short fic, that is to be expected. (See above rant)

I am NOT a Vegeta/Chichi fan. I am, however, a fan of in depth fics, and this would really have the potential to be one. *nods* I don\'t know that you would have to start with a couple of chapters before your first one, I think things could be taken care of by flash backs, but many things could be explored, not only with Vegeta and Chichi (BTW, I loved how you had Vegeta questioning whether or not Trunks and Bra were his) but also Goku and Bulma. (after the guilt is delt with, there is many steamy lemons that could come of that)

.... Again, see above rant. hehe

NO YOU CAN\'T END IT LIKE THIS.( looks at what\'s left of your body parts) I SO MUCH MORE OF THIS STORY. I JUST LOVE CHICHI AND VEGETA STORIES. WHY DID YOU END IS SO FAST....CRAP I WANTED A NICE AND HOT LEMON TOOOOOO. >.< GROWLS

See, that wasnt resolution. That was just cruel. I guess it was, in a way, but come on. Oh well. I still liked it.

WOW your words to this story goes very deep. we married women do feel this way from time to time. I hope you write more and soon. Iwant to go on this jouney with CHICHI.

Personally, I need resolution. How I get it, I do not care. But it needs something. (BTW, that means I liked it.)

I really like this