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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all! Heck! Who am I kidding? This fic is perfect! Keep up the good job and update soon!
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this somewhere else... And I loved it! But it was never finished so I\'m really happy to see it here.
It\'s quite intruiging and can\'t wait to see more! Your writing is beautiful and I love the ideas of this story.
--Dhampir
It\'s quite intruiging and can\'t wait to see more! Your writing is beautiful and I love the ideas of this story.
--Dhampir
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nicely written and unique story. I love fantasy as well and am glad to see someone take up the task as well as you have. I\'ll be eagerly checking for another update.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore fairy tales. I really like the set up and I\'m very curious as to how the Demon will get his sacrifice (I\'m trying to avoid spoilers, here) to forgive him for taking his mother those long years ago.
I also really liked the little touches such as the squirrel\'s fun not being as soft as expected; the sunny napkin; even the sacrifices\' father just... avoiding the issue.
I also really liked the little touches such as the squirrel\'s fun not being as soft as expected; the sunny napkin; even the sacrifices\' father just... avoiding the issue.
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May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed it! The amount of time you\'ve spent on the story is evident. Everything is descibed with careful details and your use of imagination is to be applauded. I hope you update soon and I look forward to reading more.