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for Smoking Cigarettes At Night

by sweetsatincocoa

schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great!

*looks at you seriously with lighter in hand* I haven't set my house on fire, yet...but if you want me to so you can write a lemon to this I totally would @_@

But I can understand leaving it here :D Wonderful and very much worth reading.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting idea, but I didn't set my house on fire.

Great story.
person Niia
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was like aww, then aww an then aww again....but the awws turned into OH MY GOD our smoker was Al! hehe, I recognize myself in the fic, me and my guy. not my brother. but still. Soooooo cute and the ending was quite a surprise!
person jen
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just so you know i just did a total 180 brain flip with that story. i was thinking all like.. havoc, havoc, havoc and ed.. yey! and then **WTF** AL????!???!?!?!?!? my brain hurts. its not used to being tricking into doing stupid things it normally wouldnt do. i hope ur happy XD
person AJAngelique
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O...M...G....
person silvertales6 (not signed in)
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha!....\"Smoking, drinking, and hair experimentation is bad for you\"

that was a cute little tid-tib of EdXAl. Muy bien mi amigo. Oh...and thanks for the review for 14 May. It made me warm and fuzzy inside. ;)

and perhaps there will be a 15 May. dunno yet. :)
person Moonwing
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! That was so sweet I got a cavity!!!
person tellbell
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot.......... I love you\'re writing. You made this work, cause I\'m not even an Elricest fan like that. But this was hot. >:)
person Metranome
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was very cute. I didn\'t quite burn my house down, but I had lots of giggles at the very idea that sweet, innocent Alphonse would smoke. Or swear. Or drink. Or do hair experimentation. You\'re a fantastic writer, and your unique view on the characters is cool, for lack of a better praise. :)
person Lollercaust
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It made me set my house on fire.

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