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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you, i love you, i love you!! AMAZING STORY!! It doesn't have any shameless smut, and yet...i still love it! *huggleslicksgropes* Oh yeah, thanks for "popping my comment cherry" XP
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was utterly beautiful.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness that was so great. The song fits perfectly. Its so sad but so happy. I sense a wrighter in you. Good luck in later writings.
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic i really like how it turned out. Plus the song of choice is a great one too. Good job keep up the great work.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, Met. This is so beautiful. It has such heart and feeling. I think you\'re amazing at bringing out emotions in characters and even in the reader. Please don\'t ever stop writing.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful. heartbreaking, too. strangely, you don\'t see many fanworks that deal with the elric brothers\' mourning for their mother and their home. maybe it\'s because such feelings may seem so particularly strong, obvious, or painful by their failed attempt to bring her back to life. but this, it really showed the sad, wounded, abandoned child in ed.
i\'m not familiar with the song, but the lyrics, and the placement were quite evocative: trying to capture and keep some perfect thing, the feeling of home.
i\'m not familiar with the song, but the lyrics, and the placement were quite evocative: trying to capture and keep some perfect thing, the feeling of home.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffel* That was beautiful. Damn, I\'m like an inch from crying during the thing. It\'s beautiful. And sweet. And like... G-rated, but who cares? because it\'s just that heartwarming a story.
Thank you.
Thank you.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Absolutely, 1,000% beautiful.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so beautiful...*sobs* You got Ed and Al on the nose, go you!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! I LOVE THIS TO BITS, the characterization, the plot, everything. You\'re an awesome writer :) write more \'kay.
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