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February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice start, I really like it! The plot seems good enough and the portrayal of both Ed and Envy was great, as well as the sex/rape scene. Well done.
I'd love to read more...so please do continue and do it ASAP!
I'd love to read more...so please do continue and do it ASAP!
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Perfect for those dark writers such as myself. One small problem however. People do not shutter. They "shudder"
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December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um...Would you mind terribly if I asked you to write more? 'Cause I'd like that.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UP DATE PLEASE!!!!!!!GOOD STUFF, IM LOVIN IT!
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! I hope more chapters are coming
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so um...yeah...what happens next? Updates will be soon, yes?
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sex is too sudden and rushed. And while \'Hagane no chibi-san\' is Envy\'s pet name for Ed, it\'s unlikely he\'d use at the end of every SENTENCE.
I like the Fullmetal whore thing though..
I like the Fullmetal whore thing though..