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Depressing, man, poor Trunks

Just read 2nd chapter, it\'s even better than the first! Radditz is scary in the flashbacks....

Please UPDATE!! This story is SOOOOO GOOOODDDD! I LOVE IT!!

This is good! Can\'t wait for more!

Wow..I\'ve always thought \'What if Raditz had taken Gohan?\', so I really hope you continue with this fic, you\'ve done well so far!

Wow, this is truly horrific Dharma and really nothing like you usually write. Still, it\'s intriguing and VERY dark. I like it.. wow, I really do. Because all of a sudden, all bets are off. The Gohan WE know, isn\'t Gohan anymore. He\'s Radditz son essentially... and in that sense, just as much of a monster. I only hope that he remembers the love he was given as a kid and that that can seperate the two... though thusfar, it doesnt\' seem to be the case.

And now Trunks is here... Very interesting indeed. I can only imagine that this will be a heartwrenching tale. You can bet I\'ll be here every step of the way.

Camaro