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for Lemonade

by mistryl

person Starwarrior
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles* well, that was unexcepted! That was great, and alovely lemon indeed! Keep up the good work!
person silverfox
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was funny and also very mean of tako to trick poor rei like that but also a very good idea i could just picture tako in a skirt very funny and cute mental image. keep up the good work
person Ghost Dragon
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo,JMK! I love this chapter! Ph and I got the chapter you sent me. But somthings up woth my uncle compter and I can\'t send Emails. So when I get to a compter when i get to ATL,Ga. I\'ll semd it to u okay?
person J.S.
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
takeo cross-dresses? ....lol dats great
i thought u were gonna give up since ud hadnt updated in a while
but im glad 2 c u avent
i only ave 3 more exams 2 go....yay!
update soon
person Blackrose
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol. That was a classic. Really cool. Hope Tyson tricks Ray some more like that. Poor Ray though. Hope he also gets a little revenge. Looking forward to reading more of this.
person J.S.
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im bk...i still ave tests but i gave myself a break

so many lemons...*drools*

keep da gud work up....mayb i should revise 4 my german now

Tschuss


person Blackrose
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. That was a good idea, in the arcade I mean. I\'m trying to get my story out, but at mo, I\'ve got a writer\'s block. Typical huh? Lol. Looking forward to seeing more.
person Starwarrior
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I love that! It was... I dunno I what I can say for it, but it was interesting. Though, maybe you could... Nevermind, just make juice it up a little bit, I dunno, but it seem to me it was missing something. Not sure what, but keep up the good work! Oh! By the way... Um... are you a chick or a guy? I read the reviews and saw couple of people calling you dude, and some people call you a girl... so um... what are ya?
person silverfox
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i wouldn\'t mind playing a game like that with rei or tyson
great chapter as usual keep up the good work
person Blackrose
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE! That was a great chapter. Looking forward to the next one. Hope Tyson doesn\'t get anymore rashes. Lol.

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