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for Lemonade

by mistryl

person silverfox
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was an AMAZING chapter man phone sex that was a brilliant idea
person Blackrose
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, talk about an intense phone call. Lol. This is getting really good. Looking forward to reading more soon. It\'s really descriptive. Hope Lee/Rai doesn\'t give Ray a hard time.
person Blackrose
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really cool. I love this story. Hope to see more soon. By the way, I\'d love for you to be my beta, maybe even help me with it. Looking forward to reading more of your story.
person J.S.
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ive neva read a max and daichi pairing but i thought dat was really gud
and i got 2 say, u update really quickly...im impressed
keep up da gud work
person J.S.
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god
dat was amazing
i reviewed saying u update fast half an hour ago
and when i come bk
u\'ve updated...again!!!
how do u do dat?
do u ave esp?

btw nice chappie....so he talks 2 himself while he masterbates....interesting ;)
person silverfox
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha very funny and cute chapter
loved the ending of it!!!
person Blackrose
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw man, and here I thought Kai was getting some. Bad Hiro. He\'s so bad. This is really good. Looking forward to reading more soon. Man did Ray sound good.
person J.S.
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww dat last one is sooo sweet
update soon, its really gud
person Blackrose
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is getting really good. I love your story. Hope Kai doesn\'t catch them again. Lol. Looking forward to reading more.
person silverfox
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice
very nice
great chapter
update soon

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