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for Lemonade

by mistryl

person La_moon
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good, im waiting for the other 29 :)
as for a side lemon i\'d like to read and Kai/Jyo.
And i think its really cool that you made a male OC cuase i see soooo many Mary-sues and girl OC\'s
its nice to finely see a guy:D.
please update soon.
La_moon
person Niffty24
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dun dun dun dun!!!!!!

Very kewl! I can\'t wiat to see what Tyson does to Rei ^^
person lo
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nicely written. Try not to rush through the scenes, have fun with them.
person Chibi Drigger
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...oooohhh....-grins- Awsome! I really liked it! Hehe! Well please update soon! Ciao! -Cd
person j.s.
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i thought dat 1st chappie was gud
but i was wondering wherethe u r continuing da story or just doing random lemons
keep on writing
person Akela
schedule May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so fucking cool! incidently, im actually watching the Phantom of The Opera as i type! the music fit perfectly! how ironic is that!?

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