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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mindless zombie* Moooooore......
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that! So HOT! And thank you, by the way, for ending it with a nice bit of tenderness. That was beautiful.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It seemed incredibly fitting and realistic. Please do continue this. I especially appreciate how your writing style and story content is over the top with dramatics or flowery talk that one usually associates with romance novels and too often fanfiction.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowzas! Completely HOT! My roommate rejoices that you have discovered your inner pervert. I rejoice that you have written such wonderful Ed/Roy Roy/Ed! *contented sigh* So could we assume from this fic that Roy has something for Ed that is more than sexual? I\'d believe that. Ed should mellow a bit and enjoy. But anyway--just my musings on the Ed & Roy relationship. Please write more! I will look forward to it!
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I read this story about three days ago and I\'m just reviewing now, why? Because every time I even /think/ about this stroy I turn into a convulsive pile of laughter!!! Very well written, really. I just don\'t think Ed would be that forward his first time, even if he had been reading porn for a week. (I was the one who sent the art, too, btw, just so you know.) I was able to draw if before writing about ! I\'m not sure if I should be ashamed of that or not....
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG u updated! *blubbering tears of joy* I really hope you will continue to write this... esp Al, or threesopme.... *perverted giggle* I love love love love ur writing style and characterization. Al was the most pleasant surprise, ever. I don\'t think anyone ever portrayed Al to be that way but u managed to capture him in a convincing manner... omg I\'m babbling am I? *hails you anyway* I hope you\'ll update the other two fics too tho... *sheepish* I kinda like ur Al more... and poor Roy! >_<\'
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Verrry nice! Teenage boys make crappy lovers - just ask teenage girls! I\'m glad Roy has some patience. A gay male friend of mine says \"Who cares if a sixteen year old can do it ten times a night if it only lasts two minutes a time?\" On to more smut!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY hope that you continue this.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT. Damn hot. Please for the love of all things holy, write MORE!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh what happens next? Update soon!