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More more! that was deliciously fun. Fun in the tub. Oh yeah that is what I call bath time. Okay I am a dork. =P

You know those things that are just so damn adorable that make you just cock your head to the side hold your hands to your face, sigh and go \'aww.....\'? That was one of those moments. You\'re a damn good author, you know that? Holy shit. That was awesome, but i think you might have added a bit of plot whether you intened to or not. Now, Roy seems like he WANTS a romantic relationship with Edward. So...i suppose its your choice to let him have it or not...(I recommed you do!^^) Anyways, please update soon! I really adore this fic even more now that they had a sweet moment! And i absolutely love the fact that Edward was reading up on the porn! ^^ *snicker*

Love,
Xiaolang\'s Ying Fa

PS, the sex was to die for! ^^

This has officially become my favorite FMA fic. Hell, I think it might by my favorite fic ever! Rarely do I read something that has me not only giggling like a drunken hyena, but also doing so consistently throughout the whole story.

My dear, I love this!

You have kept FUN in the naughty and that Elric boy is pretty damned IN CHARACTER! This is an extraordinary feat, which I\'m sure you know. Your writing has rhythm to it, it is punctuated (and I don\'t just mean the grammar, heh,) and it is entirely clever. [I also include Marigold in this praise.] You have me chomping at the bit to see the much coveted \'3/3\'!

If you have other writing - Please post, or link to its location in your profile!
If you don\'t have other writing... for heaven\'s sake, keep writing! We all need a little giggle in our pool of attempted angst and meaning. [I insist, though, that comedians have the more poignant understanding of drama, having experienced much of it to arrive at the final destination of \'funny\', so I\'d be thrilled to read your meaningful angsty angst meaning drama drama *bongo*.] I\'m on my knees - honestly; this chair is very uncomfortable, and quite a bit too short for the desk - \'I want some more, sir\'. ;)

Dear sweet elder gods that was hilarious! Truely the funniest thing I have ever read in terms of yaoi. Will there be a second chapter? I really hope so. This is just too amusing!

OMG!! That was hilarious and hot as hell!! Really good on the dialog, just absolutely loved this whole chapter. Good job!!

Hooooly hell! *cracking up*

You are -fantastic-! I\'ve never read a fic that was so dirty that had me -laughing- so hard before. The last line- ohhh, the last line. XD

*cheers loudly* I -adore- the fact that the seduction was on Ed\'s terms, too- and the eventual compromise so that they both get their kinks. And that Roy teases the hell out of him. If you continue with this fic- more of -that- would be fun. ^^

Funny as hell! LOL! Ed in a schoolgirl outfit and discoveringhis own kink at the end? way cool!

*cracks up* OMG, that ending was sooooooo funny!!! ^___~ Very clever idea -- I really enjoyed this fic a lot! I can totally see Ed coming up with rules for his sex life, lol. Keep up the good work!!!

*Is in throes of laughter*

You characterize Ed so well. XD