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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I've never left a review on this site before, so i hope i'm doing this right. I LOVE your trilogy. I'm not a Roy fan, and still the way that you have handled each of the three situations (roy with one and then the other and then both) is brilliant to me. Al's character was captured very well. Oh, i wanted to let you know something neat that not many people are aware of if they've only watched the anime and movie, because they are not the same story as the manga at all, but when Al does get back his original body, it hasn't grown much more than Ed's, and since they share a mind link (Ed has been eating and sleeping and excercising and masturbating for two bodies, basically, because Al's soul is connected by Ed's blood) and the two never really grow up. Like they're father (who is NOT Envy's father. different being, but look-alike), they will live for a LONG time because they aren't quite human, and they age and grow VERY slowly because of it. The author of the manga almost sued for the movie because it messed up her plot so bad (mechas can't travel through the Gate, and Ed didn't grow that much). Al actually comes out of the Gate at 14 years old, and smaller than his brother is in the manga. the author never intended for him to grow more than an inch past his brother, ever. neat, huh? they always stay small! it's cute. especially in potential to stories like these where Al is SO uke. anyway, i rambled forever.
I love how you made Al so sensitive in this, and how his personality is pretty spot on. i'm surprised he didn't cry more over losing his brother, though. but this isn't a drama, it's a sexfic, and a great one. nice safeword, btw. loved that part. and how Al used it at the end of the last chapter. fantastically written, too. your storytelling ability along with great grammar really make this fun to read over and over again!
I've never left a review on this site before, so i hope i'm doing this right. I LOVE your trilogy. I'm not a Roy fan, and still the way that you have handled each of the three situations (roy with one and then the other and then both) is brilliant to me. Al's character was captured very well. Oh, i wanted to let you know something neat that not many people are aware of if they've only watched the anime and movie, because they are not the same story as the manga at all, but when Al does get back his original body, it hasn't grown much more than Ed's, and since they share a mind link (Ed has been eating and sleeping and excercising and masturbating for two bodies, basically, because Al's soul is connected by Ed's blood) and the two never really grow up. Like they're father (who is NOT Envy's father. different being, but look-alike), they will live for a LONG time because they aren't quite human, and they age and grow VERY slowly because of it. The author of the manga almost sued for the movie because it messed up her plot so bad (mechas can't travel through the Gate, and Ed didn't grow that much). Al actually comes out of the Gate at 14 years old, and smaller than his brother is in the manga. the author never intended for him to grow more than an inch past his brother, ever. neat, huh? they always stay small! it's cute. especially in potential to stories like these where Al is SO uke. anyway, i rambled forever.
I love how you made Al so sensitive in this, and how his personality is pretty spot on. i'm surprised he didn't cry more over losing his brother, though. but this isn't a drama, it's a sexfic, and a great one. nice safeword, btw. loved that part. and how Al used it at the end of the last chapter. fantastically written, too. your storytelling ability along with great grammar really make this fun to read over and over again!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are, without doubt, a god.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You totally fail at making abuse of power and sexual abuse sexy and arousing.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, these two fics definitely meet my seal of approval! ^_^ I really like Marigold, with good ol\' perv Roy taking advantage of poor Al. Did I say that I loved it? hee hee... The way you were descibing everything just had me grinning in perverseness. Great fic! EM
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! keep it going!
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite of the 3 stories, I neve thougt roy/al could be good, but.. HELL IT WAS GREAT!!! ajaja!! I need more!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! please continue!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!! *bounces up and down screaming* Lol I actually check this section daily waiting for your updates ^^;;; *hurries off to read drooling*
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, much giggling. Though not in nearly as much volume and velocity.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the first ever RoyAl fic ive read... I plan to now correct that mistake. i didn\'t think that pairing would work but the novelist gladly admits defeat. *bows* I applaude you. as does Kitsune, who is currently miffed that someone is better then her at slash fics.