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November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whazzup!I just love your story i cant want until the next one comes up.I just love TyRe there just so cute together.I cant delieve that kai did what he did that was so mean.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! A new part and another interesting one. Good job on it.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A little short, I must say, but I think it was really good. I didn\'t find any mistakes. And it needs a hook. Something what makes people want to read forward. This was a good start so keep it going. Oh and I almost forgot; I could be your beta reader. If you\'re interested, contact me. You should be able to see my email address above this message.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn\'t noticed this continued. But that last chapter wasn\'t so good as the others. I didn\'t like but maybe it will continue better?
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blush* Well, I can\'t wait to see where you\'re going to take this. Keep up the great work.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwww poor ty... this is good, i feel so soz for the poor boy... update soon plz
Liah xx
Liah xx
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this was a very interesting chapter keep up the good work and update soon
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wey....i soooo totaly like your story plz...update..
cuz i wanna know whta kai is gonna do with tyson....so you better work on the next chapter
cuz i\'m waiting....
cuz i wanna know whta kai is gonna do with tyson....so you better work on the next chapter
cuz i\'m waiting....
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July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOMAN U HAD BEST UPDATE SOON!!! LIKE NOW I WANAN READ THE ENXT CHAPTER!! ANYWAY, I GTG, ALTERZ!!!!!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude you so gatta continue this fic, it\'s really good. Can\'t wait to find out what happens nexts. And UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!
Ja ne.
Ja ne.