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by Jareth

person pun_xy
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! Really. And if that was the first one you've written in English I have to say I'm deeply impressed by your skills :D. I'd love to see more from you
;)
person Serenity
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good fic
person thooruchan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good one, this fic.
I love the way they interact.
Tought, I would love to see how Goku seduces Vegeta, A \"complete menu\" would be lovely.

^_^

Good job, keep writting
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww! The praise!!! *grin* I liked it! Though, as I mentioned last time, the cumming from just hearing him is a little unrealistic ^^;

I know you\'ll write more fics, so DO IT! :D
person Macha
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I see TALENT!!! Very well done. Excellent lime/lemon, however you concider how far they went.

I\'d love to see more writing from you. Possibly something building up to the sex, rather than just a PWP, but PWP\'s do make me a happy camper!

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