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oooooh, please, please more, please this is really good, I want to see how the month ends and if ed and al keep going at it, and if they move in with roy. and and, please write more

Elricest AND Roy there too enjoying it as well! W00t!

You are... astounding. This... *grin* This is -fantastic-.

I love how Roy cuts away their defenses, and I absolutely adore that Ed\'s reason for protesting that he can\'t do anything with Al is because he loves him. The first kiss in the entryway is adorable- especially Al giggling- and I freaking -adore- how mean they both were to Ed during Chutes and Ladders.

And this line... was hilarious. And fun, and all-around -great:
\"\'I thought this was punishment,\' said Al with a naughty grin.

This was going to be a REALLY good month.\"

*happy sigh*

Yay!!! OMG, that was great!!! ^___^ I loved this \"trilogy\" -- feel free to write a \"follow-up fic\", too, lol!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!

Well hot dawg! I\'m happy to see a conclusion to your three-parter. Very enjoyable. I only wish there was more. There\'s just something about the three of them together. ^^

You might want to fix the formatting, though. At the beginning and end there\'s a block of unreadable characters that end up making the formatting too wide to read on screen. Had to paste it into a new window.

Wow, what a wonderful way to end a three-part story. It was cute, in it\'s own kinky way, but I loved it. I can\'t wait to see more from you.

*A* OMG u updated! *runs around in circles screaming with joy* I love ur writing... I really, really hope you will come up with more soon... it\'s so hard to find good FMA fics... and to me urs is the one of the very few best ;_;