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for The Fallen Angel

by saturn12sg

person Laurie Hall
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good!!!! Update please?!!! How could they forget about her??? That's interesting. I hope she goes back home!!!!
person Nakazaki
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon~!! this is a beautiful story and im dyeing to find out what the ending >.^ soooo update soonn!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
proof a little more but not bad, and progress with the other thinking about chi chi some more, but it\'ss an interesting concept, so keep writing.
person shippo-chan
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot. bIt\'s very inteesting and has a nice plot. I look forward to the next chapter

Shippo-chan
person oznerol
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhh update soon or ill lose my mind ahhhhhhh!
person DEEP SERENITY
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I kinda like where is is going, Gohan\'s name should be at the end of chap 2

and if they don\'t remember chi chi, then who do they think is their mother? and why does pan remember, could be an interesting story
person A.J.
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a cliffhanger!! I absolutely LOVE stories w/ Chi Chi and Goku and how they deal with things when he leaves for long stretches of time. Please update again soon and good job!
person Laini
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so sad!!!! dammit man poor goku..and poor chichi.Uodate A.S.A.P. b/c i want to find out wth is going on!!

P.S. If you have a way to let ppl know when u update i would like you to email me or something so i know whnever u update.I would appreciate it a lot. JA NE!
person Laini
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so sad!!!! dammit man poor goku..and poor chichi.Update A.S.A.P. b/c i want to find out wth is going on!!

P.S. If you have a way to let ppl know when u update i would like you to email me or something so i know whnever u update.I would appreciate it a lot. JA NE!

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