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for Letting It All Hang Out

by ClarySage

person saske\'s iris
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha that was great! And i absolutly agree love to see those poker faced characters get shaken up... grrr im not a poker face so i must say mustang is an irritating character for me i agree with ed on this one lets knock a brick off!
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* I love it. It\'s so innocent... but not.
person Spark
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH!!
person Spark
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HELL YEAH!!
person Chris
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dood, I love the way you depicted Al!! When he get\'s his body back, he\'s sure to go on a kissing spree!!
*kisschu*
person -Kat- (2 lazy 2 log in)
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!
person Miranda_Ocean
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHHA! That was great, I loved the last line there. lol wow great story! thank you! Bye!
person Ri
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it. XD And that last sentence All sid to Ed. hah amusingly cute. Great job.
person Cidsa
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so cute :D
I really liked this, it was so adorable :3
I think you should write about day 2 with Havoc hehe.
person hysteria82
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love all of al\'s encoragement and the ending was a great surprise! Are you planning on doing that whole ed/havoc thing too or is this just a one shoot?

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