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for Comfort Zone

by Moonwing

person No one special
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! You have to update this SOON! I CAN\'T WAIT TO READ THE REST! It was so funny in the end. Hahahaha. GOOD JOB!
person possessed_penguin
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_o.... awesome ^_^ I loved Roy\'s last comment, but he was kinda-sorta-semi-out of character there. However, it wasn\'t anything too catastrophic, and I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to more of your work ^_^ !!!
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter!! Quite funny if I do say so myself. *giggles* More? Pretty pretty please!
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww!! This is my very favorite kind of story ^_^ I like it even more that the hottest sex scene ever. Greatness!
person Yah-Lahne
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!
person Juna
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot! Please say you are going to write more. I hope that was not the ending cause that was hot! It made me giggle like a dork. =P
person BWinner(Not signed in)
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was really sweet. I enjoyed this little ficlet. Very nice work there.
person Mija
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwww that was sweet, and so in charactor for them, I liked it alot, was it a oneshot or is there more? hope theres more, ive recently have become obsessed with FMA and have like read every Roy/Ed fic Ive managed to find so far, and I like how this one started if there is more, would love to read more, but it stands good and sweet as a oneshot too, much huggles and smiles Mija...:-) btw although ive read alot of FMA fics I have yet to review any of them, this is my first FMA review, but I will be going back to review those other ones I loved as well, soon. I was going to loose my ISP so was just trying to read as much as I could before I lost it, so didnt review, now that Im not going to loose it now I can review and take time to do so so to other FMA authors I do apologize for the slight, it was not meant to offend.
person Ebony
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, i liked it. please update soon!
person Anon
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, short and sweet. Good.

But.. uhh.. hate to say this---

SPOILERS

Edward was away at the time of Hughe\'s death. He didn\'t find out until alot later.

/SPOILERS

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