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for Green Eyed Monster

by Mija

person Kenz
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good I could have sworn this
fic was titled soemthing else the last time I read it XD.
person nutmeg
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I\'m in love. Seriously. I have fallen in love with his fic! You have to write more! *on knees and begging* Please?! Please?! Please?!

Rock on!
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohohooo, I really REALLY love this new chapter. It\'s so much fun to imagine Ed torturing poor Roy so badly. It\'s always fun when Roy\'s being tortured. I don\'t think it sucked at all and I just can\'t wait tne next chappie ^^ Please write it soon!
This far this fic has been one of my favourites. I dunno why exactly. But it sure is well written and funny. And teasing!!!! Please, let the Roy x Ed lemon be there soon!!!
person Madrona
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yea! A new chapter!

Don\'t be so hard on yourself, I thought the tension was great. It\'s nice to see an Edward that is as sexually powerful as Roy. In fact, it seems like he may be even more powerful.
I didn\'t hate the whole maids outfit thing. I thought it was hilarious. As far as the chapter before goes, it wasn\'t too sappy. It just points out HOW MUCH Ed has grown up.
But am I looking forward to the leather pants again? YOU BETCHA!
person Ri
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to see some action!!!! T_T Kidding, not really but I can wait...maybe not. Anyways heh great chapter, poor Roy going through that torture that serisously sucked big time, but heh it was funny. Anyways I cannot wait to find out what will happen next! And I cannot wait for the RoyxEd action! Yes that is all I care for. XD Just kidding. Nice job, and sexy description. ^^
person Caitlyn
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m not too sure about this, but my dad\'s in the Air Force and I asked him once whether or not a Brig. General is higher than a normal General and I *THINK* he said that a regular general was 4-star, and a brig was 2-star. Hope that helped some.
person puffin
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*mouth hangs open then start to laught* oh my gosh I love this chapter. It was so....so....well...pefect. I love the way Ed played with Roy in this one. Keep it up and update soon.
person Kai
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great portrayal of everybody!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens!!!!!
LOVE YA!!!!
Kai
person *Yukimura*
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm....Never really crossed my mind about this kind of story...Yet the picture of Ed in THAT kind of outfit is...Interesting....Bravo!!
person W.A
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a sweet chapter. Poor Ed trying to fit in...I love how you made this last chapter. Very sweet. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming.

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