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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great! I love this story more, more
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, after reading the author\'s note I understood why you wrote the chapter in the first place. It sends a good message, but by the end it was truly reaching cheesy proportions. The grammar was fairly awful, lol, just being honest. I can\'t wait for your next chapter. Mustang is in for one Hell of a day, especially with you orchestrating it all (meant as a compliment). \'Till next time.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow what a sweet chapter. Please keep it up and update when you can. Thanks for letting me know you update.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
From Ch 2:(Can Anyone please tell me if its Farman or Falman and who the heck is he really? is he the silver spikey haired guy? and who is Breda? and whats the name of the guy who helps Ross bodyguard the Elric brothers?)
1. Vato Falman pronounced Watteau Farman; notice in Anime some names spelled with l\'s are pronounced like r\'s (example: Kirara from InuYasha pronounced Kilala)
2. He is; A warrant officer under Hughes and Later under Mustang. Checks out the train to see if there are any suspicious people on it. Quickly sees Al and goes psycho. (Many Episodes)
3. Yes he does have silver spikey hair.
4. Heymans Breda Second Lieutenant, a bit chubby, afraid of dogs, ally to Mustang (Many Episodes)
5. Denny Brosh - Military Person conected to Ross. Looks after Ed and Al for a while with Ross.
Hope that helps a bit. I like finding stuff out ;)
Great story so far!
Huro
From Ch 2:(Can Anyone please tell me if its Farman or Falman and who the heck is he really? is he the silver spikey haired guy? and who is Breda? and whats the name of the guy who helps Ross bodyguard the Elric brothers?)
1. Vato Falman pronounced Watteau Farman; notice in Anime some names spelled with l\'s are pronounced like r\'s (example: Kirara from InuYasha pronounced Kilala)
2. He is; A warrant officer under Hughes and Later under Mustang. Checks out the train to see if there are any suspicious people on it. Quickly sees Al and goes psycho. (Many Episodes)
3. Yes he does have silver spikey hair.
4. Heymans Breda Second Lieutenant, a bit chubby, afraid of dogs, ally to Mustang (Many Episodes)
5. Denny Brosh - Military Person conected to Ross. Looks after Ed and Al for a while with Ross.
Hope that helps a bit. I like finding stuff out ;)
Great story so far!
Huro
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GS here. Oh. you sooo need to continue this.... *drools*
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this story. Keep it up and and update when you can.
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It\'s so wonderful! hheee hee I\'m going to draw Edo in a maids outfit now.....
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I wanna know what will happen next! Please update soon. Mmmmm Ed in a maid outfit what a sexy image. *Drools* Great job in this chapter ^^ Riza is sweet. That is very sweet of her caring like that for Ed. Ahhhh she is so mommy like! Great job! Keep it up!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still love your fanfic. I hope you can magickly(that\'s how I spell it) pull the next one out of a hat so I don\'t have to but I know that\'s not going to happen. Oh well, I guess I\'ll to be patient. I hate being patient.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel embarresed for ed. when i see a image of ed in that i can\'t stop laghing. don\'t stop there keep going