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for Green Eyed Monster

by Mija

person juna
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah Ed is going to be in a maid oufit! So hot! ^_____^ Anyways I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Great jjob!! I am so loving this story. Weeee!!
person Angel Kawaii
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so cool! Ed in a maid outfit. I have a pic like that! If you want it just tell me or give me your e-mail so I can send it to you. It\'s pretty hot ~_^. Till next update! Ja ne! ^__^
person Death
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You must update soon or else I shall find you, rip off your arm, and shove it up your ass. Anyone can use that comment if they want to, it\'s not copywrited. Just don\'t say you came up with it. I\'m serious about the threat too. *Closet door slams open and evil monkey points at Mija. o.O* Thanks.
person puffin
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Keep it up and update soon. When you do update please email me at erinthacker@comcast.net
person aspiker
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good! The twist you\'ve taken with Ed being the cock of the walk and Roy being unsure is refreshing --> it is something not seen in FMA fics. I hope that you will continue in this mode, Ed being the sure, dominate and Roy being the dominate yet submissive.

BTW - the AU feel of the story is good too. The characters are spot on, believable and well fleshed out. 8-) Keep up the good work!
person Riyoko
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even thought there was no lemon and it was short I still liked it. Can\'t wait to read more!!!!
person AZNkitsune
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! I don\'t see alot of FMA fics with Russel so I love this fic. I love the way you made older Ed! Yay! Your right about the Jealous Roy. It makes things fun. Update Soon! Ja!!!
person W.A
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely love! I can\'t wait for the next chapter! Great job delicious and uh well i can\'t wait until it gets even more tastier. XD Okay I think i\'m just hungry. Anyways great job!
person Anon
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo! Go Ed! I really like this ficlit so far and hope that u update soon.
person Fuzzy Eared (not signed in)
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gotta say, I\'m lovin\' the dialogue...and the images of Ed\'s ass in leather pants. Hmm... (studying mental picture) no wonder it\'s so popular. I cannot wait to see this develop. Heads up, though, it\'s spelled \"their\" and not \"thier.\"

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